IT'S FINALLY DONE!!

[Dear Doctor Q]

I finished my bomb map FINALLY! I have sent versions to a few of you, please check this out:
FPSBANANA > Maps > CS:S > Bomb/Defuse > de_orchid_beta (http://www.fpsbanana.com/maps/66457)

[jake_aka_s4l]

Looks OK.

[SSLJ]

Looks pretty good.

One thing I might point out is that you do seem to use a lot of cube structures. Try spending a few hours just adding minor flares to them, if you look at most buildings they have some architectural detail that just makes them seem a little bit more interesting. That might be the only thing from the screenshots that I can say, otherwise it looks like you did a good job.

[Dear Doctor Q]

Looks pretty good.

One thing I might point out is that you do seem to use a lot of cube structures. Try spending a few hours just adding minor flares to them, if you look at most buildings they have some architectural detail that just makes them seem a little bit more interesting. That might be the only thing from the screenshots that I can say, otherwise it looks like you did a good job.
thanks! Some guy on fpsb said he could make a new nav file for me and an overlay, but other then those 2 things I won't be updating the map. I will be making new one's I'm just trying to create a good layout

[toastmonster[RS]]

llooks good so far, to be honest, instead of just creating new maps, you should try picking one you've made and trying to perfect it... a lot of times figuring out what you did wrong or what you could improve on will be a lot quicker of a helper than trying to start all over again... but then again, you've made more maps than me, so... it looks good, i'd like to test it out.